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Eh oui, dans le cadre des contrôles continus de mon cours de langue, j'ai du écrire un texte qui est a rendre mardi (une page maximum)
Anglicistes que vous êtes, dites moi ce que vous en pensez...

An Unfortunate Event

This year, Halloween was a dark and stormy night. My friends and I decided to have a big dinner at my place and have fun, and maybe watch some scary movies.
It was almost midnight when, as we just finished the meal, my cousin Molly (who is, by the way, a little bit weird) told us that she was sure something is going to happen. We laughed at her saying that it sounds normal on Halloween. She nodded anxiously.

We were very excited, and wanted to do something very creepy. So we went out to the graveyard, all costumed with dark and long clothes. We looked like dead bodies floating in the air. It was just about messing with the kids.
We were hidden behind a mausoleum, and as a 15 years old fella was passing by, we jumped on him, and he schriecked like a little girl and went away very fast. Such a great moment !
Then, we got back to the street, looking for some candies to steal. But at that particular time, we heard a loud shot; not just a "toy's shot", a real one ! And then a second !

Everybody started to run everywhere, and I have to admit that I was frightened too…
Tom thought it was time to go home. So did I. Molly, Paul, Jessica and Courteney followed us. We walked along the road, under the rain, wondering what that noise could have been.

Five minutes later, we were in the front of my house, and the door was wide open, but no they were no lights in the hall. We all looked at each others.

- I told you… you didn't believe me…

- SHUT UP MOLLY ! said Courteney

I got in very slowly. Everything sounded normal. I called my mom, but I got any answer.

Then I called my father. Still no answer. My heart was beating so fast, I thought it was going to explode. The group looked at me with no less fear, and they followed me to the backyard. We saw something lying on the ground. We got carefully closer…

Anyway… I remember in every detail the day I found my parents dead.


Voila voila, j'espere cartonner !

Flo a écrit:

my cousin Molly (who is, by the way, a little bit weird)

LOL

Flo a écrit:

Anyway… I remember in every detail the day I found my parents dead.

Excellent! J'adore ce genre de fin

merki, je dois le rendre la semaine prochaine en fait, mais vu qu'il est déjà prêt...

ouh ca dépouille.... ca calme quoi ^^. La fin c'est clair c'est "wouah" "putain"...

Chapeau, j'espère que tu auras une bonne note

tssss j'ai eu 16 !